Waiting for the Rain in My Life !!

It's raining in my city
From the burdened clouds of mournful grey
Spectacular green striking all over
Kids in mirth
People in gay
But I am still the same
With a bright light in my eyes
Waiting for a downpour in my Life
With a Storm inside me
I keep the Lord in my Sight
I demand you O Lord
Sooth the atrocities i am subjected to
Waiting for his counsel
Waiting for eternal peace
My heart cries out to Lord
Teach me the art to deal with the pain,
people give with their spoken-unspoken words
Heal my heart with that magical drop
That magical drop of rain !!
© Meghna, 2011, All rights reserved.

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  1. shaognJuly 30, 2010 at 4:00 AM

    wow.. thats so deep thoughts and beautifully written :) gud going meghna

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  2. UnknownJuly 30, 2010 at 4:03 AM

    Waiting for you to compose music for this :)

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  3. indraJuly 31, 2010 at 1:27 AM

    Meteoric progress. words with feel. absolutely brilliant! Keep it up!

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  4. MeghhnaaJuly 31, 2010 at 1:54 AM

    Music...its on its way .... shall post My Rhythm Divine soon :-)

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  5. Saurabh DebJuly 31, 2010 at 7:10 AM

    Good literature, but sounds of brooking- suitable for an age that's too far out for you yet!

    So since I have been asked to comment, I m gonna hit it with fun instead to lighten things up a bit. I'll hazzard taking an engineering slant at literature n watch what comes outta of the mix of logic n art. An exercise for plain innocuous pleasure; to be taken in the same spirit.

    "Teach me the art to deal with the pain,
    people give with their spoken-unspoken words"


    Begs the question, are n't we solving the wrong problem? Could the poet (ess) rather be asking...

    "Teach me the art to deal with the People"

    Cause it is highly unlikely that even God with his/her infinite time n energy shall set upon an endeavor so utterly futile, as to rectify people en masse. It is probably easier n cheaper -whatever that translates to in God’s own currency --to grant thy the gift to tune out that which shall leave no positive imprint. In plain speak ...the power of "just don’t care" :D Try it ..its therapeutic.

    OR , since the introspection n beseech began with the onset of precipitation..Could it rather be ...

    "Teach me the art to deal with the RAIN"

    Given the havoc it plays on the life of mere-mortal-motorists, that may well be the mass prayer we can all join in, n become a case worthy of solving even for God himself.

    Next request... somethign of a lighter note :D

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  6. MeghhnaaAugust 2, 2010 at 1:55 AM

    @Saurabh: The difference lies between the untamed tempestuous views of a free wild soul and the humble,controlled emotions of a Godly soul ;-) Its all about faith and asking HIM only, who else after all ??

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  7. Anurag DuggalAugust 21, 2010 at 10:43 PM

    a very intelligent discussion ..i must say...but i can only humblyt say...poetry is not a thoerum or an equation ...it forever asks the sublime answers and begs the most eternal questions .....megh ...good going..i just wish u never ever cry ....again...from shiva i pray ..pain becomes your salvation ...god bless....

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